Please, give me your opinion...

I know it's a little bit like begging, well it actually is begging, and I really don't like to beg, but ...
Can you guys please check out THIS page. (I've also linked to it in the sidebar)

It's something I've been working on, after reading Maisie's and Carla's household profiles.
I liked the idea, but I didn't want to create a page for each family, so I thought it would work out fine as well if I did it a little bit like my playable NPC-page.

So please give me your opinion. What do you think of the teksts? Are they too long? Is it too much information to give for each family? .... Are there too much spelling- or grammarmistakes?

So excuse me for the begging! I would be very thankfull with your opnions!